Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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the real value of the online job and Correct your spelling
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work
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their work
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Moreover
, parents look for cheaper and Linking Words
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more effictive
effictive
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money
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money
. A prime example is, the American school in Cairo which advised all the students to try Use synonyms
the
online classes for one Correct article usage
apply
semster
and most of the families Correct your spelling
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have
found that it was a great idea. Unnecessary verb
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study
online but students Use synonyms
also
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extra
time
to Use synonyms
study
more and enjoy their hobbies.
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are
much
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especially
with the increase in population and Add the comma(s)
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the
inflation.Correct article usage
apply
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