You recently did a cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cooker course you would like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding the recent cookery

course

Use synonyms

that I did. My name is Gonzalo Fuentes, I will give you some feedback regards what I have enjoyed during the

course

Use synonyms

and I will give suggestions.

Firstly

Linking Words

, I would like to express my opinion about the Cookery

course

Use synonyms

that I took recently. The

course

Use synonyms

was really didactic and engaging,

although

Linking Words

the writing part was full of assignments, Gavin the teacher was absolutely incredible explaining everything and making the class fun.

Additionally

Linking Words

, the practical classes in the kitchen were awesome, the topic that I most enjoyed was red meat.

Secondly

Linking Words

, I will tell you about my experiences at my new job and say thank you for the recommendations, the restaurant is amazing they change the menu every month allowing me to learn many different recipes. Even though

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

I am only working 2 shifts per week, I am making the most of

this

Linking Words

experience.

Last

Linking Words

but not least, I would like to suggest to the school to add the

course

Use synonyms

of cooking with firewood. I reckon many people would take

this

Linking Words

course

Use synonyms

due to

Linking Words

there are many job opportunities but no one is taking the opportunity

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

them

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

because of the lack of experience and preparation. Hope you take my suggestion into consideration and help many other students. Yours faithfully, Gonzalo Fuentes