You recently did a cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cooker course you would like the school to offer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding the recent cookery
course
that I did. My name is Gonzalo Fuentes, I will give you some feedback regards what I have enjoyed during the course
and I will give suggestions.
Firstly
, I would like to express my opinion about the Cookery course
that I took recently. The course
was really didactic and engaging, although
the writing part was full of assignments, Gavin the teacher was absolutely incredible explaining everything and making the class fun. Additionally
, the practical classes in the kitchen were awesome, the topic that I most enjoyed was red meat.
Secondly
, I will tell you about my experiences at my new job and say thank you for the recommendations, the restaurant is amazing they change the menu every month allowing me to learn many different recipes. Even though,
I am only working 2 shifts per week, I am making the most of Remove the comma
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this
experience.
Last
but not least, I would like to suggest to the school to add the course
of cooking with firewood. I reckon many people would take this
course
due to
there are many job opportunities but no one is taking the opportunity of
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them
because of the lack of experience and preparation.
Hope you take my suggestion into consideration and help many other students.
Yours faithfully,
Gonzalo FuentesCorrect pronoun usage
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structure
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tone
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task response
You have effectively covered all parts of the question by describing what you enjoyed, your current cooking experience, and suggesting a new course.