You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town center's in your country all look similar to each other . You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper . In your letter 1.Say which point in the article you agree with 2.Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town center’s . 3. Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam , Recently, I read an article in a national newspaper in which you wrote regarding the town

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in our nation ,

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I disagree with some of the information that you provided in

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advert. I read all parts of the topic and I like one thing about your article is that it is well-written and organized.

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, I agree with the written fact that

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of city

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has increased in

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modern era.

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, I disagree with the content of similarities between all city

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.Our central area has some preservation of historical buildings .

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, there is a Shiva temple

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in the central location of town ,which expresses its unique beauty. Could you plan to visit our city next week? I will be there to support you. I hope

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information will be useful for you . I am waiting for your reply soon. Yours Faithfully, Rahul Sharma.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

157 words

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