At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the numbers of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the increasing economy almost in all countries over the world affects

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prosperity in every

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situatation

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supports many parents

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have a tendency to have more children than before which leads to the growth of young people around the world. The numerous number of youths has merits and demerits which will be discussed in

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essay. It seems that the merit

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the demerits for some reasons.

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with, commonly, youths may not easy to control because they feel that they have their own lives and rules.

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they look the same as

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, young adult

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their own way to show what they want and even they

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the line sometimes.

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, teenagers are the most age who break the law in my city

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as using drugs, drinking alcohol, or breaking traffic lights.

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have tried to have a strict control Physically, young adult

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better than older people which lead to

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higher

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. it is evident that brilliant notions or innovation often come from youth. It may happen because of not only their thought

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but

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their current ages which are the golden period to produce

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to change people's

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. Many news

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that new innovations,

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as

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intelligent

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and 3D-printing

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, come from young adults who still become students at

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university. To conclude, having

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large number of

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are

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more fruitful than the drawbacks because they may be able to change into

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better world in some fields.

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, the negative side of it still can be tackled by

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application

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some

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strict rules.