Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a view among some individuals that professionals should
work
in the
country
in which they learned about their fields.
However
, opponents of
this
opinion argue that they have some right to choose where they want to get jobs, regardless of borders. In my personal opinion, I support the
second
view on
this
issue.
First
of all, everyone has a responsibility to choose where to live,
work
or visit. So are they. They are no exceptions for
this
free. If every professional
have
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to only
work
in the specific
country
where they have been trained,
then
most
people
will not be willing to have a dream about being doctors and engineers. And it will lead to
make
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this
career's reputation worse. Since they are limited in choosing their countries to
work
.
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Secondly
, if they are allowed
this
claim, they will be professional with more responsibility and passion. As they can choose their admiring places by themselves, they will have more
motivations
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and rational reasons to try their best on performing their jobs.
For example
, engineers who aren't limited in every aspect became very successful and overcame every obstacle in their
career
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.
This
is the reason why I don't support on
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of having to limit their places to
work
.
On the other hand
, some
people
disagree with my claim.
First
of all, many
people
are
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depend on professionals, so they have to face a lot of strict rules. Especially when it comes to doctors and nurses so that
this
limitation can prevent horrifying accidents that can be occurred from different training methods in each
country
.
For example
, medicines and treatments from the USA are completely different from China. So, the opponents require some restrictions, when it comes to professionals. In conclusion,
people
should be able to choose wherever they want to
work
because
this
encourages them to
work
harder.
Otherwise
, to prevent them from misunderstanding caused by different
trainings
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, they have to be forbidden to move to
other
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another country
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country
for
working
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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