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More and more people are buying through the online shopping in last decate.Do you think,it is advantage or disadvantage development.

#people #decate #advantage #development
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last
 ten
years
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 the majority of
people
 have started to meet their needs through websites.From my point of view,online purchasing is more and more convenient and beneficial for individuals. There
are
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number
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 of significant benefits of online purchasing that
it
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helps
to
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as
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safe
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saving
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individual's
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individuals
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 time by making their shopping
comfortable
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more comfortable
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 than offline
shoppings
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shopping
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.Take as an example according to the current dates, nowadays 80
percent
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 of
people
 strongly believe that, online shopping is one of the most popular
way
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ways
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 to make their shopping comfortable.
In addition
 to that, online buying gives to
people
a
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 opportunity to achieve
unexpensive
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inexpensive
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and
high quality
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high-quality
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 products even between
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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overseas countries.
For instance
, according to the statistics,
this days
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 a huge amount of
people
 in the world widely prefer to use
a
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apply
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various websites like Amazon,Ali Express etc Turning to the other side of the argument
that
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,
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 nowadays there are many
type
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types
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 of tricky websites which aimed
themselfs
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themselves
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 to steal customer's money
by
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in
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 illegal ways.Take
for
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,for
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 example, some internet sites are recording their customer's credit card information without their permission and sharing them with 3rd parties. Another major disadvantage is that
,
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 sometimes maybe some problems
about
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with
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 products which
is
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are
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purched
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purchased
 via.And it takes
people's
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people
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 a lot of time to solve the trouble.
For instance
, if the product is not functioning properly,
people
 have to return the item and wait for a long time to solving
solution
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a solution
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. Having
weighef
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weighed
 everything mentioned
up
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apply
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,I am able to come to s conclusion that online purchasing is
very
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 beneficial way to
shopping
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shop
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 and
also
 gives
to
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human's
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 more comfortable chances
although
 there are sometimes some minor glitches.
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