Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. you would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. write a letter to the hospital. In your letter - explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital -Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do - give details of when you would be available for this work

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Dear Sir/Madam, I refer to your advertisement regarding unpaid services and because I believe it is good to help others and to give some hand in my free

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, I would like to have the opportunity to share the hospital in their efforts. As a financial expert, I may support the hospital in all accounting, financial and tax consultations, during the

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available I can prepare Invoicing,

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and cash

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receipts and post to the computer all the unposted entries to the system, in the same

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I may contact the hospital customers for collections and or schedule the standing balances. About the

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to start

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free job, I will be available every week on Saturday, Monday and Wednesday from 4:00 pm till 8:00 pm starting from 1st of

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month. Please let me know if

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is suitable for you so I will arrange to start. Kindly contact me by email or mobile as soon as possible Yours faithfully, Musa Harb

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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