You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear sir/madam, I am Kailaash from GEC 23rd room and I am writing to let you know about a few problems which I am facing with my roommate due to shared accommodation, including late-night parties which made me write
this
letter. As you know, I work from home, including the weekends, and it has been very tough to manage my work and take my client class due to noise and late-night parties as well.
On the other hand
, during the weekends the entire flat members play fun games and do not let others go to bed as they want some company to keep them occupied.
Then
, What about my work? How do I pay rent without working during a critical situation like Covid? I do not think I can live in
this
hell,
Hence
, I would like a room with basic facilities in a good community. I am ready to pay even extra money to come out of
this
hell. Hoping that I would get into a nice society. I look forward to hearing your response to
this
request. Best Regards, Kailaash.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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