In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is commonly claimed that
those
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physical
media
content
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such
as printed newspapers, magazines or
books
will no longer exist and be replaced by free digital
media
. Personally, I entirely disagree
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notion.
Firstly
, not all
contents
are easily read using digital devices.
Secondly
, even though
a great deal of
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contents
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are
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free online, some high-quality articles or
books
are needed to pay. Some
books
with rich images or diagrams are hard to read on computers. Children’s book is one example, which has plenty of
colorful
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paintings to attract kids’ attention and give rise to their imaginations. In
this
case, if children read
content
online, the light from the screens might damage their
eyesights
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.
Furthermore
, they are hard to focus on the
content
if they can’t touch or interact with those rich images.
In addition
, most free
contents
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online don’t suit everyone’s taste.
Therefore
, some people may choose to pay
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some
books
or
media
platform
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platforms
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for their interests.
For example
, Amazon’s
book store
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provides several free
books
to readers.
However
,
most
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popular or latest
books
are
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needed to pay. New York Times is another example that allows people to read 5 news per month, but
for
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read more, readers have to pay
monthly
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fee
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to access more. In conclusion, even though
many
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free
contents
are easily accessible online,
those
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still can not fit everyone’s interest, children, latest or high-quality
content
consumers, to name but a few,
Thus
, I believe physical
media
might reduce their customers,
but
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they will not disappear on the publishing market.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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