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In some countries, more and moe people are becoming interesteed in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Nowadays,
people
 are interested in their houses or buildings’ stories about the past times in some countries.
Also
, I have only one reason why
this
 incident happened and a possible way in which
people
 can research
this
. Some
people
 believe that knowing ancient story about their homes is unnecessary, while others believe that if they know about their
house
’s stories, their houses will become more and more valuable to them.
On the other hand
, they can know how many years ago their family lived there and it makes it more memorable.
Also
, they think that explaining the
history
 of their houses to their children will gain information about them.
Moreover
, if someone who was well-known in
history
 possessed their building, the price of their building will increase more than we thought, and everyone will attract to
this
house
 more than before and want to buy it, and
people
 who own that
house
 can use their
house
 as a museum.
However
, there is one problem which is how can
people
 research their building’s
history
. Probably, the only solution is they can study documentaries and histories about their town, but it may be difficult to search for information among plenty of past.
Also
, some countries do not have enough documentary and local
history
 materials, and it will become another trouble for the population who is really willing to know. To conclude, knowing about their home’s
history
 has numerous advantages, but it is not an easy thing we thought. If someone really wants, they need plenty of time and materials which help them to find the
history
 of their building or
house
.
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