Essay #1: Technology have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

In

this

modern era, the importance of kids'

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leisure

time

is decreasing by leaps and bounds because of

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technology. Many pupils claim that it is changing their way of life. In my, opinion the position of the

internet

appears to be more rational. In

this

, essay we will

further

elaborate on the countless positive effects and minute negative impacts of

this

trend and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will

further

explain

this

argument but the most preponderant fact is it is increasing children's decision-making skills. Another pivotal aspect is infants learns challenging task

such

as coding and artificial intelligence from the

internet

.

Furthermore

, in the past, toddlers waste their precious

time

in indoor sports namely Chess, and, Ludo.

Although

, now they learn crucial language from the

internet

.

Similarly

, a survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford revealed that children who use the

internet

in

free

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time

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more creativity power compared to those who spend in the traditional way.

On the other hand

, adolescents in ancient times,

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fascinated by education.

thisDespite

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this despite

, the majority of kids are now fascinated by academic knowledge owing to the

internet

.

However

, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

this

trend.

therefore

, the most alarming one is the

internet

diminishing

lifestyle

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of kids

in other words

in the past, infants love outdoor games in their leisure

time

.

for example

cricket, and, basketball. But, now child's like virtual games

for instance

Pubg, and, Super Mario.

Besides

, children use the

internet

in terrible ways to illustrate porn websites.

In addition

, the article published in the eminent newspaper depicts that the

internet

steals money from innocent infants. Moving

further

, it is pertinent to mention that the

internet

plays a vital role in crimes.

Also

, promote some diseases like cancer, and, fever. As well as the

internet

wastes their free

time

on Facebook and, Instagram. To sum up, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach the conclusion that the perks of the

internet

are too great.

Nevertheless

, the minute's drawbacks should not be overlooked either.