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Some people believe that teaching children at home is the best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Education
 plays a significant role in every child's life. And it begins with the help of schooling. But few masses argue that homeschooling
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 is the better option for pupils .others , believe that there is a beneficial way of
education
 formed in schools which is important to them. I will discuss both views with their own opinion. On the one hand , homeschooling is a modern way of development for
children
 to surpped
studies
 .
Firstly
, pupils grow their own space which is comfortable for them to
studies
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.
Beacuse
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Because
 some
children
 are flexible
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 evening
time
 or night
time
 for
self study
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. So that it gives a superior opportunities to spend more
time
 to find out their talent and interest towards any specific field .
Although
, parents give additional
time
 to understand
about
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children
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 outcomes.
Thus
 ,
children
 find
a favorable courses
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.
Moreover
,
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 advancement in technology there
are
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 numerous online
material
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materials
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 available on
internet
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 which
fulfils
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 the doubts . For , example, most of the students e-learnings through BYJUS which is
a
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 online teaching platform, consists of online classes with tutors.
On the other hand
,
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school
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schools
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 are the
back bone
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backbone
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 of
education
. They have a huge reputation in society . In general, institutes provides a
decipline
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discipline
,
social
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and social
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 experience apart from
studies
therefore
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 , youngster learn physically everything in
better
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 way . As well as ,
children
 can able to take part in other extra co-curricular
activites
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activities
 which is important to do with
education
. Schooling is advantageous due to
a students
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students
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 can
argued
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their
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 teachers to solve their doubts at any cost. For , instance , there are many subjects like
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 chemistry which
do
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 not learn without experiments which
is
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 only possible
on
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 schools to understand more about them. In conclusion, teaching in Homeschooling gives
a opportunities
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an opportunity
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 to develop their own space and spend more
time
 on their weak
masters
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 of
studies
.
However
, schooling has a huge beneficial condition in every field of pupils.
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