Some people believe that all children should have a pet or an animal to look after. Other people disagree, however, saying that this depends on a child’s circumstances. Consider these opposing views, and give your own opinion.
Some people think that all kids should take care of pets in their houses, but others believe it's not an obligation and it depends on the
children
's situation.
Basically, a society that believes that kids should have a pet
merely want to teach them about compassion. If the children
have a pet
to look after, it will grow their emotional intelligence such
as empathy. For example
, kids who have a cat, a dog, a rabbit and etc tend to be caring since they have a duty to feed, take care of, and ascertain their pet
's prosperity in order to grow well. Therefore
, having a pet
is really recommended for children
to nurture their compassion and empathy.
On the other side, some communities believe that children
can do whatever they want to make themselves happy, including having a pet
or not. They tend to believe that having a pet
is not an obligation for children
, but it depends on their condition. For instance
, some children
who have allergic to fur, or are sick, are encouraged to not interact with animals due to their well-being and safety. That's why this
recommendation is considered optional.
In a nutshell, having a pet
can nurture children
's compassion and empathy. Despite being useful for them, it can also
harm children
who have a particular issue within themselves such
as sickness or allergies. I believe that having an animal to take care of is an alternative in part of children
's education, but we have to read the situation as well, whether it's a good choice and relevant for them, or not.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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