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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforminig the lives of consumers. To what exent do you agree or disagree wih this opinion?

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It is a controversial topic whether skilled individuals
for instance
 doctors and engineers should
work
 in their educated
country
, or in wherever they want to.
Although
 both of them have positive and negative aspects, I agree more with the latter.
First
 of all, it is undeniable that experts working in the
country
 where they are educated have the following positive and negative effects. With regard to the former effect, it helps to stabilize the economy of their
country
 by securing professional resources.
For instance
, if doctors and engineers will
work
 in the
country
 where they were trained, the problem of the shortage of them in their home
country
 would likely not be occurred.
As a result
, it will minimize the insecurity of local citizens.
On the other hand
, to invent new technology, collaboration across the
country
 is mandatory,
therefore
 the drawback of
this
 is that technological advancement would be slowed down. Meanwhile, if those professionals have the choices to
work
 from any
country
, it can pave the way to solve the
issues
 that we are facing right now,
such
 as global south
issues
. If higher educated people
work
 in an advanced
country
 in the field, they will equip with more advanced skills.
As a result
, it will help to solve the
issues
for instance
 saving the environment with new technology, and lives by advanced medicine, and improving the life quality of developing countries through their support. As we are living in the globalization era, I believe that cooperation across the
country
 is vital to protect our lives and the Earth. Overall,
although
 there are advantages of experts working in their trained
country
, I believe that the advantage of giving a choice of
work
country
 to them outweighs tackling the
issues
 that we are facing right now
such
 as global south, decarbonization, cybersecurity, and so force.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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