Children's educaton is expensive. In some countries the government pays some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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is costly. In some

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the executive orders finance some of or all the costs.

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is overpriced, I believe the advantages outweigh the drawbacks because the

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will invest

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teens

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to have an educated young generation and there is a necessity to invest less

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arms. One of the disadvantages is that

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is every year more costly for

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everybody

in all parts of the world because it takes more than sixteen years for a person to reach a degree.

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, teens need food, clothes and transportation for at least fifteen years to be able to be ready to start school every morning, and

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amount of

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, some of these students will need a private tutor and

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is sometimes unaffordable for many of them.

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, in The United

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it is expensive to pay

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after school because

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private assistance

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with

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fifty dollars per hour.

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sounds costly, it is worth

to pay

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for it because these

teenegears

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teenagers

need to be prepared for the future. One of the advantages is that the

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has plenty of

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to afford all these expenses and prepare these

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to be able to obtain a degree.

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, having a much more educated society might lead to

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the indices of crime because the society will be

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. Another advantage is that there is a huge necessity to invest less

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in buying arms and

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soldiers for war because it is preferable to think

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than think

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conflicts. To explain

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away

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for young students who want to pursue a degree and those who had debts

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forgiven with the

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to keep going on their

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. I strongly believe

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is a preferable way of spending

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because the

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a better future to our

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and society. To conclude,

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is overprice

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, it is preferable to spend on

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and their future than buying arms and training soldiers. For these reasons the advantages

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outcome the disadvantages.