Some people think that exams are a good way of assessing a student's level. Other people believe that they put unnecessary pressure on young learner and tell us very little about theri acutal ability. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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in every pupil to evaluate their level and some others believe that it make a lot of pressure
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,I describe that mostly all nations use
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as a weapon to estimate the level of the
students
.they use multiple ways of assessment to evaluate them.
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in Sri Lanka,they promote lots of
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why they use them
On the other hand
,some are hoping that the unnecessary pressure is made by the
exams
and assignments. These make
students
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think and do more and more not only
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but sometimes it makes to take some
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, in India many
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bad results
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their
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exams
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weak
students
. In conclusion , I think that the
exam
should be held for
students
to calculate the student's level and as well as they must reduce the
exam
fever among the
students
.
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