Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, naot individuals because individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The
environment
in this
new era become more taken for granted by human beings. There is a debate that the community will not contribute a lot to protect the environment
. And it is the job of politicians to take responsibility
. In this
essay, I disagree that only politicians have the responsibility
to keep the environment
protected. It is the responsibility
of everyone in the community.
First
of all, our environment
is totally taken for granted by people
. Because they keep on doing things that can damage our environment
. For instance
, people
tend to buy more cars in each household rather share
one car. Because of Correct word choice
than share
this
, we are breathing polluted air. And another one, people
prefer using plastic rather than reusable bags when they are buying groceries.
On the other hand
, politicians can also
protect the environment
. Because they are the ones who have the authority to implement rules on how to protect mother nature. For example
, a mining company if the politician will not give the permit to operate can prevent landslides. Because when they give permits to this
mining company, they have the go signal to cut all the trees and to dig the soil which can lead to a soil eruption. But there are some people
who are illegally mining even without the permission from local government.
In conclusion, it is not solely the responsibility
of the politician to protect nature. The community need to participate in this
because even politician will implement but humans will not cooperate. Protecting the environment
will be a failure.Submitted by athena26 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite