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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

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Nowadays in some ,
countries
 the traditional occasion is going to be extinction significantly. The reason for
this
 position is that western practice is becoming more potent in undeveloped
community
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.,
However
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 Government administration and local communities should take some steps to promote their
culture
. On the one hand
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some undeveloped
countries
 are following the western
culture
 from some modern well developed
countries
such
 as
in
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India most
of
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people
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the people
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 are celebrating Christmas
instead
 they are not from that
culture
.
Moreover
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 the celebration of some
festivals
 like
lohari
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Johari
,
teej
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,
Basantpanchmi
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and Basantpanchmi
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 are not becoming popular among
people
.
Secondly
, less knowledge about the
culture
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festivals
 and traditional
culture
 in
advance
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 society.
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,
people
 Nowadays
living
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 in cities in
nuclear
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the nuclear
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family
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families
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 without grandparents and both parents are employed so,in
this
case
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 children spend most of their time in daycare and school or with technology. Moral values are not
teaching
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 by schools and technology.they can learn from home and families about their
culture
 and they
loosing
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their
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 importance of
culture
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cultural
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celebration
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celebrations
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 and
festivals
. On
the
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apply
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another
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other
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 hand ,
people
 and governments must be participating in
this
 situation to come up with some solutions
for
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 instance, governments should provide some books and education about their home
countries
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countries'
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culture
 in educational institutions. Whereas parents
also
 have
important
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an important
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 role to teach their children some moral principles and
cultures
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festivals
 by celebrating with them at home or in society . In conclusion,
this
 essay explains the major factors about
this
 concerning situation and some of these measures we should apply to come out
frome
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from
this
 situation with positive results Because
culture
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the culture
a culture
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 of
countries
 displaying the beauty of their nation all around the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traditional festivals
  • heritage
  • cultural identity
  • folklore
  • cultural tourism
  • intergenerational
  • homogenization
  • commercialization
  • intangible cultural heritage
  • community engagement
  • awareness
  • revitalize
  • cultural diversity
  • educational programs
  • governmental support
  • logistical support
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