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Today, many people do not realize how important the natural world is. Why is this? How can people learn more about the importance of the natural world?

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Introduction
Nowadays,
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plenty of
people
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 do not understand the significance of
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 world. Because they do not care about sustainable development with
nature
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.
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, we can show them
importance
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the importance
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 of
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the environment
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 with social media.
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Body paragraph 1
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 of all, at the moment a multitude of
people
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 do not know a lot about environmental problems around the world since
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 information does not reach them.
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, they do not have ideas about the necessity of
nature
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. Some
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 still think that everything
good
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 in
nature
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,
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 we have many
obtacles
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obstacles
.
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,
variety
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 of
people
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believe
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 that wealth and
successfulness
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is
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 much more important
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then
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nature
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.
Hence
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, these
people
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 do not care about their world.
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, we all should save our environment since these problems can affect
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us. We do not have
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rights to give some damages to animals, plants,
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the atmosphere
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 and so on.
People
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is
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 part of
nature
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.
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, we should live with
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nature
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 rules and we cannot break them.
Body paragraph 2
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, there are several measures to illustrate
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people
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 the essence of
nature
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.
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, we can open their eyes with social media. Because approximately half of
population
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 has social media accounts.
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, they can gain information from these applications and we can provide them
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with information
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 about
nature
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.
Secondly
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, authorities can make some mandatory trips for all
people
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 outside the city where there is pollution and guides who will explain to them what consequences
these pollution
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 can give.
Conclusion
In conclusion, at the moment we have a lot of
people
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 who do not realise the significance
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nature
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of nature
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.
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 we can depict the importance of
environment
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the environment
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 with
2
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methods given in
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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