Today, many people do not realize how important the natural world is. Why is this? How can people learn more about the importance of the natural world?

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Nowadays,
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plenty of
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do not understand the significance of
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world. Because they do not care about sustainable development with
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.
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, we can show them
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the importance
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of
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the environment
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with social media.
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of all, at the moment a multitude of
people
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do not know a lot about environmental problems around the world since
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information does not reach them.
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, they do not have ideas about the necessity of
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. Some
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still think that everything
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in
nature
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,
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we have many
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obstacles
.
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,
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of
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believe
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that wealth and
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is
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much more important
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then
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nature
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.
Hence
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, these
people
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do not care about their world.
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, we all should save our environment since these problems can affect
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us. We do not have
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rights to give some damages to animals, plants,
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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and so on.
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part of
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.
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, we should live with
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nature
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rules and we cannot break them.
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, there are several measures to illustrate
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people
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the essence of
nature
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.
Firstly
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, we can open their eyes with social media. Because approximately half of
population
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has social media accounts.
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, they can gain information from these applications and we can provide them
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with information
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about
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.
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, authorities can make some mandatory trips for all
people
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outside the city where there is pollution and guides who will explain to them what consequences
these pollution
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can give. In conclusion, at the moment we have a lot of
people
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who do not realise the significance
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nature
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of nature
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.
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However
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we can depict the importance of
environment
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the environment
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with
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methods given in
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essay.
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