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Today, many people do not realize how important the natural world is. Why is this? How can people learn more about the importance of the natural world?

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Nowadays,
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plenty of
people
 do not understand the significance of
natural
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the natural
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 world. Because they do not care about sustainable development with
nature
.
However
, we can show them
importance
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the importance
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 of
environment
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the environment
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 with social media.
This
 essay will examine the main causes and solutions of
this
 problem.
First
 of all, at the moment a multitude of
people
 do not know a lot about environmental problems around the world since
this
 information does not reach them.
Therefore
, they do not have ideas about the necessity of
nature
. Some
people
 still think that everything
good
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 in
nature
,
although
 we have many
obtacles
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obstacles
.
Moreover
,
variety
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 of
people
believe
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 that wealth and
successfulness
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is
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are
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 much more important
then
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nature
.
Hence
, these
people
 do not care about their world.
Subsequently
, we all should save our environment since these problems can affect
on
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us. We do not have
such
as
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rights to give some damages to animals, plants,
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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 and so on.
People
is
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 part of
nature
.
Consequently
, we should live with
nature
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nature's
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 rules and we cannot break them.
Nevertheless
, there are several measures to illustrate
people
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 the essence of
nature
.
Firstly
, we can open their eyes with social media. Because approximately half of
population
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 has social media accounts.
Therefore
, they can gain information from these applications and we can provide them
information
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 about
nature
.
Secondly
, authorities can make some mandatory trips for all
people
 outside the city where there is pollution and guides who will explain to them what consequences
these pollution
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this pollution
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 can give. In conclusion, at the moment we have a lot of
people
 who do not realise the significance
nature
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of nature
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.
However
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 we can depict the importance of
environment
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the environment
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 with
2
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methods given in
this
 essay.
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