It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
In the modern days, everybody wants to become an engineer and doctor to serve the nation and get better career opportunities,
However
, it has been experienced a majority of pupils are not interested in science
subjects
due to
not getting admission
in their dream courses
. There are many causes
such
as all science
students
being unable to get admission
to their favourite professions courses
. Due to
less interest in these subjects
, the country
suffers from many issues such
as a shortage of doctors, engineers, and scientists. I will outline two causes
and negative effects on the country
.
Certainly, there are many causes
for to shortage of scientists ,doctors, and engineers. The main important reason is that many students
passed previous science
subjects
and had dreams to get admission
to engineering colleges and medical institutions but due to
limited seats available in the country
, they cannot get admission
to these institutions. For example
, in India every year millions of students
pass science
subjects
and due to
fewer medical and engineering positions available in these universities, all of them are unable to get admission
. Another reason is science
subjects
require more time and dedication to pass and many students
cannot spend time to pass these courses
because they know after passing they will not get admission
to their favourite courses
.
On the other hand
, there are some effects on society. The primary reason is countries cannot produce required professionals
such
as doctors, engineers, and scientists and they have to depend on immigrants to run their economy and look after their citizens
. For instance
, in the year 2020 COVID-19 came into effect all over the world and many citizens
died due to
the shortage of medical and scientific professionals
because every country
needs professionals
to look after their citizens
. As a result
, there was a huge loss of people and nations' economies.
In conclusion, following the analysis the causes
such
as science
need more hard work and if students
are unable to get preferred subjects
in universities, they will not register for science
subjects
, however
, it puts an extra burden on society to bring overseas professionals
to look after their citizens
and boost the economy of the country
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