Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities, while others think it is better to have students of different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion

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schools
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always a difficult issue to set. While some individuals suppose that academic capabilities are the most important factor, a mixture of various capacities
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obviously able to evaluate a
student
much more comprehensively. On the one hand,
academic
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ability can be good
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for choosing
students
.
Firstly
,
students
, who get a good
mark
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throughout the process of learning, are usually considered to have a high level of intelligent queries which is an essential and popular scale of assessing human potential.
Besides
, even
above
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fact is not completely accurate, excellent scholastic possibilities maybe demonstrate that
students
have put
much
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efforts
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in
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their studying, which is utterly an important determinant for success in the future.
Furthermore
, that
this
way of choosing
student
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has been implemented for so long proves the valid value of
this
method. Clearly, using academic abilities is a rational and irreplaceable method, but it is not enough for marking
students
on the whole.
On the other hand
,
students
have to be assessed by some other scales. To be more specific, each
student
has their own strengths and weakness,
therefore
, academic abilities are not the only scale to assess
students
.
For example
, some
students
can have some special skills or talents like singing, drawing and so forth, which no particular scale can evaluate.
Besides
, having
students
of different abilities studying together creates
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an opportunity
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opportunity
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for them to learn from each other and mutually collaborate to make something special in the future. Obviously, the importance is that
schools
should have an appropriate portfolio of
students
, which
need
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to ensure the development of both
students
’ education and general
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quality. In conclusion, both of these two perspectives are reasonable. Even though,
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assessment method is basically
necessary
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application for
schools
to choose
students
effectively.
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