Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days,
news
reports have a significant role in everyones
life. Few Change to a genitive case
everyone's
people
believe that national reporting channels
shows
no connection to Change the verb form
show
people
lives, Change noun form
people's
also
reading newspaper
and watching Add an article
a newspaper
the newspaper
news
programs are
a time waste. I Change the verb form
is
compeletly
Correct your spelling
completely
disgree
with Correct your spelling
disagree
this
statement, and in this
essay, I will explain my reasons.
Many people
nowadays depend on news
channels
for several reasons. Firstly
, people
gets
an update Change the verb form
get
about
daily feed about the things that are happening around them. Change preposition
apply
This
enables an individual to be aware of the changes in law
and rules that government passes. Fix the agreement mistake
laws
Moreover
, they get an idea about how the country is running
by the presently elected members. Wrong verb form
run
Secondly
, a
Remove the article
news
a piece of news
news
brings an
Correct article usage
apply
awarness
about different crimes and diseases that Correct your spelling
awareness
takes
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take
occurs
in a particular area or across the world. Correct subject-verb agreement
occur
This
will help people
to more
cautious, and some reporter introduces tips that could help many Add a missing verb
be more
people
.
However
, there are some channels
and programs that gives
us Change the verb form
give
irrelevent
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irrelevant
relevant
news
where they
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that
shows
no connection with Change the verb form
show
the
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apply
people
lives. But, I Change noun form
people's
donot
think, Correct your spelling
do not
don't
this
is a problem for all news
programs. Most channels
try to keep stories very short,
so that Remove the comma
apply
people
could get a gist of a story. This
is because some reports cannot cover an entire story to the public as they want to give the victims, the
respect and privacy. Correct article usage
apply
Another
problems , with popular Replace the adjective
Other
channels
are, they focus more on Add the comma(s)
,channels
celebrities
life and they tend to cook up stories about them. Change noun form
celebrities'
celebrity's
This
because
they could gain more traffic in their Add a missing verb
is because
programms
and Correct your spelling
programmes
programs
news
channels
. Also
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,Also
their
are Replace the word
there
people
who are intrested
in these types of reports.
In conclusion, I completely disagree that Correct your spelling
interested
news
is waste of time. As it is helpful to many people
to optain
daily updates on Correct your spelling
obtain
traffics
, crimes, and government issues.Correct subject-verb agreement
traffic
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite