You have decided to go on a holiday to a foreign country for 2 weeks, and you want one of your friends to come with you. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to accompany you. In your letter, – explain where and when you want to go – give details of the travel, dates and costs involved – describe some of the things you want to do

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Dear Franklin,
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pleased to know you will be on vacation
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month, so
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writing to invite you to spend two weeks with me travelling to Thailand, I will give you some information about the plans before you answer me. Most people travel to Thailand during the summer months, but
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thinking to go in the
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week of April, during the autumn season, because it is colder than in summer and I think we will enjoy our time there better.
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considering visiting some temples in Bangkok and
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some small islands the most famous, Phi Phi Island. At the moment,
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in contact with a tourism agent who told me that a standard vacation package including 14 days of accommodation in a Hotel, from April 14th to 28th, plus three tickets to visit Temples or Museums in the city centre and four guided visits to some local islands will cost $780 dollars, a bargain. When we get there,
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planning that go
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to two Buddhist Temples and The National Museum,
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we can explore the Asian seas by visiting some islands, and
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, on the following ,days we can hang around and check out local attractions
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as pubs and some musicals by ourselves. Looking forward to catching up, Best wishes
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