After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him / her know why you are writing to him / her Express your gratitude Offer him / her to visit your home with his / her family

Dear Usha, I am Phaneendra, I met with a road accident
las
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week and you
have
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looked after me when I was unconscious on the bed. I am writing
this
letter to express my gratitude to you for taking care of me. I have been working in
this
city for
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of
year
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for
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now and my family is staying in another town, so
last
week when I met with the accident my family could make it to look after me immediately.
However
, you
there
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just when I needed someone to look after me as if god has send you there. I cannot express how
greatful
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grateful
I am to you for the generosity shown
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you. By the time I gained
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consciousness
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you left so I
didnt
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didn't
get to know about you, but through other people in the
hospital
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I got your name and address. I want to take
this
opportunity to invite you to my home for
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dinner the
comming
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coming
week. Hoping for a response from you. Thanks, Phaneendra
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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