After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him / her know why you are writing to him / her Express your gratitude Offer him / her to visit your home with his / her family

Dear Usha, I am Phaneendra, I met with a road accident

las

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week and you

have

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looked after me when I was unconscious on the bed. I am writing

this

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letter to express my gratitude to you for taking care of me. I have been working in

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city for

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year

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now and my family is staying in another town, so

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week when I met with the accident my family could make it to look after me immediately.

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, you

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just when I needed someone to look after me as if god has send you there. I cannot express how

greatful

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I am to you for the generosity shown

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you. By the time I gained

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consciousness

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you left so I

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get to know about you, but through other people in the

hospital

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I got your name and address. I want to take

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opportunity to invite you to my home for

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dinner the

comming

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coming

week. Hoping for a response from you. Thanks, Phaneendra

Phaneendra

Jan 23, 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

grateful
immense respect
unwavering support
kindness
indebted
extend my heartfelt thanks
forever grateful
overwhelmed with appreciation
compassion
sincerely
warm invitation
cherish

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