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In many countries, people are changing career with increasing number. What are the reasons and do you think it is negative or positive development?

#countries #people #career #development
The number of
people
 who go for a
career
change
 is increasing in a lot of nations.
This
 topic can have different reasons.
However
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 we cannot
deside
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decide
 which side has more benefits and both two sides have their own pros.
this
developement
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development
 can have
varous
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various
 reasons. On the one hand, over time
humans
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 interests will
change
. their attentiveness will
change
due to
 changing
of
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trends and
also
 gaining more experience. These changes will have a great impact on
peoples
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 choices
therefore
it
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they
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 may cause
people
 to
change
 their
career
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careers
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.
On the other hand
,
people
 may want to
change
 their
career
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careers
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 for a better salary.
By
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 the passing of
time
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 new
jobs
 will
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accrue
assure
occur
 that have a higher income but
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do no
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no
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not
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 need a
specialty
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.
This
convenience
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 and easy way of earning money can seduce
people
too
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to
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 leave their
jobs
.
For instance
, these days the
jobs
 on
the
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social media like
influencering
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influencers
influencing
 or content creators are getting more popular
everyday
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, these
jobs
 do not need
specialties
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specialities
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 but have a great income. In my opinion,
this
 issue can have both negative and positive sides. For
it's
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 negative part we can say focusing on a special job for each
peson
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person
 costs the government. So changing
career
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careers
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 simultaneously can have a heavy burden on the government. In comparison, if
people
 are not happy about their current job they
wont
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 be
efficant
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efficient
 individuals
for
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the
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society so it will be better for everyone. In conclusion,
people
 can go for a
career
 exchange
due to
 many reasons
such
 as
eager
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 to earn more or
gaining
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gain
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experiecne
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experience
during
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over
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time
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the time
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 and these changes can have good and bad
affects
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 on
people
 and society. Negative
one
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ones
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 like
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heavy
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 burden on the government and the positive one we can name is happy human individuals mean a happier society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job displacement
  • job insecurity
  • fulfilling
  • meaningful
  • work-life balance
  • flexibility
  • career options
  • opportunities
  • acquire new skills
  • knowledge
  • rapidly changing economy
  • social media
  • role models
  • entrepreneurship
  • self-employment
  • COVID-19 pandemic
  • passions
  • interests
  • instability
  • uncertainty
  • workforce
  • career planning
  • professional development
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