In many countries, people are changing career with increasing number. What are the reasons and do you think it is negative or positive development?
The number of
people
who go for a career
change
is increasing in a lot of nations. This
topic can have different reasons. However
in my opinion
we cannot Add the comma(s)
, in my opinion,
deside
which side has more benefits and both two sides have their own pros.
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decide
this
developement
can have Correct your spelling
development
varous
reasons. On the one hand, over time Correct your spelling
various
humans
interests will Change the noun form
human
change
. their attentiveness will change
due to
changing of
trends and Change preposition
apply
also
gaining more experience. These changes will have a great impact on peoples
choices Change noun form
people's
therefore
it
may cause Correct pronoun usage
they
people
to change
their career
. Fix the agreement mistake
careers
On the other hand
, people
may want to change
their career
for a better salary. Fix the agreement mistake
careers
By
the passing of Change preposition
With
time
new Add a comma
,time
jobs
will accure
that have a higher income but Correct your spelling
accrue
assure
occur
Add a missing verb
do no
no
need a Correct your spelling
not
specialty
. Change the spelling
speciality
This
convenience
and easy way of earning money can seduce Replace the word
convenient
people
too
leave their Replace the word
to
jobs
. For instance
, these days the jobs
on the
social media like Correct article usage
apply
influencering
or content creators are getting more popular Correct your spelling
influencers
influencing
everyday
, these Replace the word
every day
jobs
do not need specialties
but have a great income.
In my opinion, Change the spelling
specialities
this
issue can have both negative and positive sides. For it's
negative part we can say focusing on a special job for each Replace the word
its
peson
costs the government. So changing Correct your spelling
person
career
simultaneously can have a heavy burden on the government. In comparison, if Fix the agreement mistake
careers
people
are not happy about their current job they wont
be Add an apostrophe
won't
efficant
individuals Correct your spelling
efficient
for
Change preposition
in
the
society so it will be better for everyone.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
apply
people
can go for a career
exchange due to
many reasons such
as eager
to earn more or Replace the word
eagerness
gaining
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gain
experiecne
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experience
during
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over
time
and these changes can have good and bad Add an article
the time
a time
affects
on Replace the word
effects
people
and society. Negative one
likeFix the agreement mistake
ones
,
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apply
heavy
burden on the government and the positive one we can name is happy human individuals mean a happier society.Correct article usage
a heavy
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