Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to be successful at school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered that
homework
is a very important part
in
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a
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study life.
Nevertheless
, some people seem that
homework
is not necessary at all and
teachers
don’t
have to ask for one. In my opinion,
teachers
have to give
homework
for
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their
students
.
Firstly
,
homework
seems to be a good type of study.
Doing
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so, a student can improve his knowledge and become more
skillful
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. In Spain,
for example
,
students
have learnt English for 5 months with a lot of methods one of which was doing
homework
as they remembered the topic
while
doing tasks.
Besides
,
this
helps
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the student
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student
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to prepare for some exams without hiring any extra
teachers
. In the UK,
for example
, all
students
who study in schools
don’t
have any extra
teachers
as they have a ton of
homework
, and
thus
, can prepare for everything without any extra help.
However
, doing
homework
everyday
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there are
also
a
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lot of disadvantages.
On the other hand
, at home pupils have to do other things
except
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homework
. They
don’t
have to focus just on school, and so, they
don’t
have to do
homework
everyday
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.
In addition
, all
students
spend a lot of time studying and they should have a rest. In schools in Sweden,
for example
,
teachers
do not give children
homework
because they think that children do so many
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during thy day and have to relax after school.
To sum up
, despite the fact that some people think that
homework
is not necessary,
doing
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so,
students
will be able to learn new information or remember
an
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old one.
In addition
, it is known that every person needs to rest but
homework
doesn’t interfere with rest.
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