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the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

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The graph illustrates compares The visited tourists' Caribbean Iceland from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, As ,graph the
rate
 of tourists always followed an upward trend,
by contrast
, those settled in cruise sheep and Iceland rates witnessed fluctuating increases. The number of Visitors who stayed on cruise ships started at approximately 0.25
million
 in 2010. after 1 year
this
figure
 increased to 0.5
million
. In 2012,
this
rate
 gradually fell to started
figure
. After that
Visitor's
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rate
 steadily rose and stood at 2
million
 in 2017. The number of visitors staying in Iceland started at nearly 0.7
million
 and increased to around 1.25
million
.
Then
this
figure
 rose to 1.5
million
 in 2013 and remain unchanged until 2015.
Moreover
,
this
figure
 experienced a little fall in 2016 but turned back to 1.5
million
 in 2017.
Finally
, the
rate
 of tourists of total started at 1
million
 in 2010 and gradually increased to 3.5
million
 in 2017.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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