Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries. But increased life expectancy has many implications for aging individuals and for society as a whole. What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society?
Survival
rate of some countries is Add an article
The survival
in
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at
apex
. Some surveys Correct article usage
the apex
has
shown that Change the verb form
have
life
expectance rate of some nation is extreme, but their increased life rate has many implications for Correct article usage
the life
aging
individuals and for society as a whole. Change the spelling
ageing
This
essay will discuss all the possible effects for longer living generation
and the community Aging has its advantages and Fix the agreement mistake
generations
disadvantage
in both sectors Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
as
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apply
a
public and humankind. Correct article usage
the
Firstly
some positive impact for maturing would be that they gain ample of
experience by working in various careers, managing Change preposition
apply
the
health and maintaining household chores, the mankind gain wisdom from those who are well known and knowledgeable people because they have seen the world with Change the word
their
bigger
lens and with age their point of view has improved. Correct article usage
a bigger
For example
, in Vietnam, Japan, India, China
, Correct word choice
and China
older
generation Add an article
the older
have
knowledge to curate medicine Correct subject-verb agreement
has
form
medicinal herbs with lots of trials their technique has upgraded, Correct your spelling
from
those
herbs have been proven to escalate one’s life span. Correct word choice
and those
On the contrary
, counties
economy Change noun form
the country's
get’s
Correct your spelling
gets
effected
, asCorrect your spelling
affected
Correct article usage
the
supply
of daily commodities increases. Since earning hand lessens, Correct article usage
the supply
GDP
of the nation Correct article usage
the GDP
take
a massive hit because Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
circulation
of money flow will be slowed down. Add an article
the circulation
Although
in certain regions there are rules that senior citizen can perform less labor work and earn their living with it. Correct word choice
However
To
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In
my
conclusion, there are both negative and positive aspects of aging Correct pronoun usage
apply
Correct pronoun usage
that effects
effects
on person and the whole civilization. In my Correct your spelling
affect
option
experience and expertise both matter but on the stake of Correct your spelling
opinion
little
less profit to the societyCorrect article usage
a little
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite