You have a friend who lives in a city abroad . You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in the city . Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him or her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the last few years . Ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

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Dear Andrew, Hope you're doing well. I'm really excited to let you know that I am planning to pursue my studies in your city soon . Now , I need some favour to get some information about the best educational institutions in your town. As you already know that we had together finished our bachelor in physiotherapy studies . I have been a physiotherapist doctor in the local hospital for the

last

two years . But, I want to do a post-graduate degree from a well-known college. As you are living in the Melbourne City of Australia and there is ample career opportunity for physiotherapists in Melbourne. So , can you please collect information about the best colleges that offer a master's degree in the medical stream? Hopefully, see you soon . Warm regards to my uncle and aunt . I am waiting for your reply soon. Yours lovingly , Rahul.

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7 paragraphs

151 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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