Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Munisa Khamrayeva. I am writing to you
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letter for enrolling on your
course
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. I have been interested in computers since my childhood.
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is the reason, I read about computers.
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, I try to learn them .
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, I could not it . Because our village has no a
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for computing .
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why my interest was reduced. But
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week I read one book that was about new technological computer functions .
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this
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phenomenon, my interest recover . And I once again begin to be interested in it.
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, I decided to sign up for your
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. But I saw that your
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is only for people who have completed our elementary
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.
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is the reason, I ask you if your
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has a special exception that can be made for me so I can enrol on the
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. I hope you will resolve the matter. And I think you try to understand me. Yours faithfully, ................ Khamrayeva Munisa.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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