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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.
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The bar graph compares the total income from three major exported products in
Southland
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 between 2000 and 2023 and the projected year 2025. Generally speaking,
Southland
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 has gained much more money from international tourism and dairy yields than
meat
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 products throughout the period. Even
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 prediction, the trends will be maintained until 2025. Compared to all sectors at the beginning of the period, considering its 8
billion
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 pay, the tourism industry made up the most significant contribution to the economy of
Southland
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 compared to only 7
billion
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 and 6
billion
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 collected from kinds of milk and
meat
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.
Southland
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 seems to have succeeded in increasing the profits from touristy as it shows that in the current year (2023), they have accounted for over 9
billion
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.
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 less by 1
billion
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 than the total income from dairy commodities, in the projected year, there will be around 10
billion
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 secured from the tourism industry
while
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 milk yields will slightly fall to over 9.2
billion
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 euros. Regarding
meat
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 products, the Southlanders need more effort in order to revive
meat
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 sector exports. Since 2000, its profits have been declining gradually, in the future they will only get 5
billion
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 from their sale.

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