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In your opinion, should young people choose their professions, or should their parents choose for them?

#people #professions #parents
To begin
 with, since it is
one
 of the most important
desicions
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decisions
 in
life
, choosing a
future
 profession can be an extremely stressful
one
.
That is
 to say, parents’ opinions are extremely important when deciding on their child’s
professions
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.
However
, I think that the wishes of others shouldn’t influence
one’s
future
. On
one
 hand, older people have the experience and wisdom that youngsters may lack.
For
this
 reason, it is important that parents navigate their children through
life
 by giving them
advices
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. Not only that but
also
, parents’ support is crucial when making important
desicions
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decisions
 in
life
. After
all
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 they are the
one
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ones
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 who
know
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 their child the best.
Thus
,
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young human needs to consider
opinions
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 of others and learn from their past experiences.
On the contrary
, not everyone’s circumstances in
life
 are the same neither
their
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 wishes and
disires
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desires
.
Following
this
, if
one
 lets society create
one’s
future
, it may lead to many
dissapointments
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disappointments
. In
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addition
,
one
 who chooses
one’s
future
 job
,
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 is the
one
 who is going to deal with that
desicion
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decision
 for the rest of
the
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life
.
In other words
, the only
one
 who is going to make the
desicion
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decision
 and deal with everything it brings
,
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 is the youngster.
Hence
, it is important to follow
one’s
 own dreams to feel happy, whole and complete. When choosing
the
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future
 profession, it is useful to consider the situation from the perspective of older people.
On the other hand
, we are all individuals who have different purposes in
life
 and for that
reason
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 every man should follow
own’s
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 dreams. Personally, if
one
 does what
one
 desires and loves, it brings happiness to everyone around.
To conclude
, parents should let children choose on their own.
Submitted by nick.winsly on

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