Diagram 1 shows a food web containing eight food chains that are marked numerically, i.e. each number indicates a food chain involving the primary producer up to the apex consumer. Refer to Diagram 2 for the categories of consumers in a food chain presented hierarchically. Describe the food web through these links, drawing examples from your natural environment, in at least 150 words. Use the following additional information if necessary: Primary producers (plants) occupy the bottom level in a food chain/food web; Apex consumers (hawk in Diagram 1) occupy the top level.

Diagram 1 shows a food web containing eight food chains that are marked numerically, i.e. each number indicates a food chain involving the primary producer up to the apex consumer. Refer to Diagram 2 for the categories of consumers in a food chain presented hierarchically. Describe the food web through these links, drawing examples from your natural environment, in at least 150 words.

Use the following additional information if necessary:

Primary producers (plants) occupy the bottom level in a food chain/food web;

Apex consumers (hawk in Diagram 1) occupy the top level.
Our natural environment comprises several ecosystems, and
food
chains
are crucial to sustaining them. Diagram 1 depicts a
food
web with eight small
food
chains
found very close to human habitation. The
hawk
is at the top of the web as an apex
consumer
while
the plants, primary producers, are at the bottom. In the first
chain
, the plants are eaten by the rabbits who are hunted by the
hawk
.
Likewise
, there are mice and seed-eating birds that are dependent on plants for survival and are consumed by the
hawk
, shown in the second and fourth
chains
. The mice
also
contribute to the third
food
chain
where they are eaten by the snakes as secondary consumers, who in turn become a meal for the
hawk
at the apex. In the fifth, sixth, seventh and eighth
chains
, the grasshopper is at the primary
consumer
level
. It is directly fed by the
hawk
in the fifth
food
chain
. In the sixth, the frog as a secondary
consumer
feeds on it, followed by the snake at the tertiary
level
and the
chain
thereafter
ends with the
hawk
. The grasshopper is eaten by other insects in the seventh
chain
. These insects are consumed at the tertiary
level
by insect-eating birds that sustain the
hawk
. The eighth
food
chain
has the highest number of links and includes all the hierarchical consumers listed in Diagram 2. It bifurcates from the
level
of the insects as secondary consumers
,
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and has the frog as the tertiary, the snake as the quaternary and
finally
the
hawk
as the apex
consumer
. The
food
web reveals how damaging a single link can result in a widespread imbalance in nature.
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