Diagram 1 shows a food web containing eight food chains that are marked numerically, i.e. each number indicates a food chain involving the primary producer up to the apex consumer. Refer to Diagram 2 for the categories of consumers in a food chain presented hierarchically. Describe the food web through these links, drawing examples from your natural environment, in at least 150 words. Use the following additional information if necessary: Primary producers (plants) occupy the bottom level in a food chain/food web; Apex consumers (hawk in Diagram 1) occupy the top level.
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Our natural environment comprises several ecosystems, and
food
chains
are crucial to sustaining them. Diagram 1 depicts a food
web with eight small food
chains
found very close to human habitation. The hawk
is at the top of the web as an apex consumer
while
the plants, primary producers, are at the bottom.
In the first chain
, the plants are eaten by the rabbits who are hunted by the hawk
. Likewise
, there are mice and seed-eating birds that are dependent on plants for survival and are consumed by the hawk
, shown in the second and fourth chains
. The mice also
contribute to the third food
chain
where they are eaten by the snakes as secondary consumers, who in turn become a meal for the hawk
at the apex.
In the fifth, sixth, seventh and eighth chains
, the grasshopper is at the primary consumer
level
. It is directly fed by the hawk
in the fifth food
chain
. In the sixth, the frog as a secondary consumer
feeds on it, followed by the snake at the tertiary level
and the chain
thereafter
ends with the hawk
. The grasshopper is eaten by other insects in the seventh chain
. These insects are consumed at the tertiary level
by insect-eating birds that sustain the hawk
.
The eighth food
chain
has the highest number of links and includes all the hierarchical consumers listed in Diagram 2. It bifurcates from the level
of the insects as secondary consumers,
and has the frog as the tertiary, the snake as the quaternary and Remove the comma
apply
finally
the hawk
as the apex consumer
. The food
web reveals how damaging a single link can result in a widespread imbalance in nature.Submitted by euler0279 on
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