The diagram shows how the Global Positioning System works in order to help people find their location anywhere on earth.

The diagram shows how the Global Positioning System works in order to help people find their location anywhere on earth.
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The diagram explains the work of the Global Positioning System in providing an exact position to users on
earth
. Generally speaking, there are three parts of
this
system, beginning with
satellites
in space, the Base Transmission System (BTS) receiving and sending data to the users, and
finally
, from the users’ perspective, how people can know their position from the
satellites
. The figure reveals that there are 24
satellites
located around 20,000 km above the
earth
and orbiting consecutively. Each of them is powered by solar energy taken directly from the sun. Since precise
time
is important, the satellite is equipped with an atomic clock attached to its board to keep the
information
regarding
time
. In terms of exchanging
information
, the
satellites
use the antenna to trade
information
with the central station on
earth
. From the
earth
’s view, radar stations capture changes brought by the
satellites
passing over them.
This
information
will
then
be sent back to space using the BTS before
finally
will be broadcasted to the users. Two pieces of
information
are sent to the user, including the exact place and the
time
it was transmitted. In order to locate, our gadget will measure the distance between a person on
earth
and four
satellites
that are passing over it by comparing the
time
data was sent, and the
time
it was received.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words earth, satellites, time, information with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 5 times.
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