Children brought up in families with less money are better prepared for life than those from wealthy families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that children who grew up in
families
with less money
are better prepared for life than those from rich families
. I totally agree with this
suggestion because children from poor families
know more lifehacks and they know how to keep and spend money
correctly.
First and foremost, they know lifehacks which, for example
, allow them to spend less on some items and services. Being brought up in a family with small opportunities means that if you want to buy something, you can wait for example
for a bargain or seek for less price. Moreover
, they can be taught by their parents how to spend less amount of money
on utility bills. Take for instance
research from the state financial University of England which illustrates that those adults who were brought up in poor families
are more well-prepared for life by knowing a lot of hacks.
Furthermore
, they know how to save and spend money
correctly. This
is because in childhood when they wanted to purchase a chocolate bar for themselves they were obligated to save money
from
birthdays or other holidays. As Change preposition
for
grown-ups
they know the principles of financial accuracy, and if they saw an advertising campaign, they would first think Add a comma
,grown-ups
whether
Change preposition
about whether
this
item is needed or not. For example
, one of the popular advertising company
showed statistics about how many people were caught by advertisements, and Fix the agreement mistake
companies
this
data illustrates that adults from poor families
spend their money
more carefully rather than those from wealthy families
.
In conclusion, I totally agree with this
statement because adults from poor families
tend to know lifehacks and be
more careful with Change the verb form
are
money
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