Children brought up in families with less money are better prepared for life than those from wealthy families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that children who grew up in
families
with less Use synonyms
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are better prepared for life than those from rich Use synonyms
families
. I totally agree with Use synonyms
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suggestion because children from poor Linking Words
families
know more lifehacks and they know how to keep and spend Use synonyms
money
correctly.
First and foremost, they know lifehacks which, Use synonyms
for example
, allow them to spend less on some items and services. Being brought up in a family with small opportunities means that if you want to buy something, you can wait Linking Words
for example
for a bargain or seek for less price. Linking Words
Moreover
, they can be taught by their parents how to spend less amount of Linking Words
money
on utility bills. Take Use synonyms
for instance
research from the state financial University of England which illustrates that those adults who were brought up in poor Linking Words
families
are more well-prepared for life by knowing a lot of hacks.
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Furthermore
, they know how to save and spend Linking Words
money
correctly. Use synonyms
This
is because in childhood when they wanted to purchase a chocolate bar for themselves they were obligated to save Linking Words
money
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from
birthdays or other holidays. As Change preposition
for
grown-ups
they know the principles of financial accuracy, and if they saw an advertising campaign, they would first think Add a comma
,grown-ups
whether
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about whether
this
item is needed or not. Linking Words
For example
, one of the popular advertising Linking Words
company
showed statistics about how many people were caught by advertisements, and Fix the agreement mistake
companies
this
data illustrates that adults from poor Linking Words
families
spend their Use synonyms
money
more carefully rather than those from wealthy Use synonyms
families
.
In conclusion, I totally agree with Use synonyms
this
statement because adults from poor Linking Words
families
tend to know lifehacks and Use synonyms
be
more careful with Change the verb form
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money
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite