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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views.

It is commonly believed among a majority of the crowd that spending
money
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 on family
celebrations
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 is the normal way of
people
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 living,
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 other part thinks that it is just a waste of
money
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 and does not have any sense. In my consideration, it is fully acceptable to make a celebration more remarkable by spending
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 on it, but only in a case when it fits the family budget and is not harmful to it. There might be several reasons why
people
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 hold the view that spending
money
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 on family
celebrations
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 is just a waste of it.
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, it can be normal for a lot of families just celebrate something in a family circle without any huge expenditure.
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, there are some families that I know, which prefer to make a celebration in their own houses with self-made food and drinks here and it makes them really happy, does not oblige them to spend a lot of
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 on it . Their logic is quite simple: why do they need to have some expenditures, if they are fully satisfied with
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 coincidence?
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, not everyone has the possibility to spend time on
celebrations
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, so they just find ways to do it with just have not
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. Despite the arguments mentioned above, spending
money
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 on family
celebrations
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 is one of the crucial ways for some
people
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 to make
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 more enjoyable and remarkable, glamorous and heart-warming.
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,
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 part of
people
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 prefers emotions and memories to
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. Is it
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 important to mention that there are several
people
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 who do not want to spend their time preparing the celebration and they just hire a company which will do it for them and
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 takes
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? In conclusion, I will argue that having expenditures on preparing family
celebrations
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 is just a waste of it.
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, some reliable reasons for having an opinion like
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 can be mentioned.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cherish
  • nurture
  • strengthen
  • bond
  • create memories
  • enjoyment
  • sense of belonging
  • reconnect
  • unite
  • traditions
  • create traditions
  • financial burden
  • priorities
  • moderation
  • budget
  • frugal
  • extravagant
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