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It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is normally believed that
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 is an excellent means of communication but some
people
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 think that it is not the best place to find
information
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. At present times, we cannot spend a single moment of our life without the
Internet
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. The
Internet
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 has become a part and parcel of our life.It has reduced our distance and turned our world into a global village.
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, through the
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 we can communicate with
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people
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 sitting in any corner of the world.
Besides
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, we can see our friends and relatives through
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call
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 with the help of the
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, during the Covid when we were locked inside our
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 we communicated with our friends and relatives with the help of the
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On the other hand
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, we can get a huge amount of
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 from the
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. Though some
people
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 think that the
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 is not the best place to find
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. It is not quite correct nor quite wrong. It is true that
,
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 we find lots of
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from
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 the
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 but sometimes we do not get
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authentic answer from the
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, sometimes, we can find wrong
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 on the
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 which leads
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 in
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society.
Secondly
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, many users of
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 spread wrong
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 through the
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 to misguide
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people
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, during the covid,many rumours were spread about the Covid which were completely false. Thereby, we can say that, though
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 is an excellent means of communication because we can communicate with other
people
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 in a short period of time but it is not the best place to find
information
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 because can find huge amounts of
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 on the
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 which are not authentic and can misguide
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people
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.Still,
internet
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 can be used for finding
information
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 but we have to be careful about that
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Democratize access
  • Instant messaging
  • Real-time conversations
  • Credible sources
  • Misinformation
  • Unverified facts
  • Reputable news outlets
  • Biased opinions
  • Algorithm-driven content
  • Overreliance
  • Traditional methods
  • Search engines
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