Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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used to be a part of the routine of any

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student ,especially

on

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young

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some people argue that

school

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homework

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their teacher, and other

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that

this

homework

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it is essential in

children

's education.

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my own point of view,

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educators will consider not giving

homework

to

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schoolers

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to have quality

time

with their families and have

time

to explore their talents and interest. Others believe that

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having

homework

is important in

children

's education

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since it will give them

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continuous learning even they are at home,

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the child should know that learning is not just happened in

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school

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learning is everywhere, particularly in the house.

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will give them routine and consistent education, which leads them to have

a successful careers

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and life in the future. Learning at home will give them additional knowledge and makes them responsible enough, in a way that, they were given a responsibility and task to do,

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leads them to be a responsible individual. Some people strongly believe that

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there should be no assignments for

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school

children

,in order for them to have enough

time

to bond with their families

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since they are in

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school

the whole day, spending

time

with their parents and siblings after coming home from

school

will provide bonding and connection.

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helping in simple house choirs with their mom to learn the basics

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life is

also

crucial,and will be absolutely useful in their future life. These are just some activities they can do,

instead

of staying in the study room doing

homework

,

moreover

, it will give them

time

and space to do their hobbies which are

also

essential in their growth and development.

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, having no

homework

will give the opportunity for

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young generations to have space after

school

,

while

having

homework

will help them to be more hardworking. As

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me, they have their own pros and cons,

moreover

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no

homework

during weekends should be considered, for them to have a family and

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