Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that technology is significantly increasing these days.

While

some

people

believe that technological achievements change us to be more social, I believe that

this

is not the term, in

fact

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it leads us to be more fragile

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human interaction. One of the most significant developments in technology is our phones. They can be used like a computer, and

people

do almost anything with them

besides

their communication functions.

Therefore

,

people

are so busy with their phones that they cannot have the

time

for spending with their loved ones like their families or friends. Because connecting on the Internet provides us

more

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enjoyable

time

by myself and we even do not think about

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socialiazed

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socialized

.

For example

, after a

buisy

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busy

day, nearly everyone wants to stay down on the couch and be relaxed, by the

time

while

they doing that they

also

prefer to kill

time

on their phones

instead

of talking with others because it is easier to do that and it helps to be relaxed.

Furthermore

, chat pots are a cutting-edge technology development that we have, and their users are rapidly increasing nowadays. It takes over the

time

that

people

spend with each other. Because of that,

people

are used to talking with

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AI

instead

of actual human beings.

This

is a strongly detrimental problem for human interactions and communication skills. If

this

growing rate of using chat-pots constantly increased like that, there would be no hope for creating a social society. In conclusion,

although

there are plenty of benefits that come with technological development, I believe these achievements lead us to be more unsocial and withdraw into our’s Shell.