Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that technology is significantly increasing these days.

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believe that technological achievements change us to be more social, I believe that

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it leads us to be more fragile

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human interaction. One of the most significant developments in technology is our phones. They can be used like a computer, and

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do almost anything with them

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their communication functions.

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,

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are so busy with their phones that they cannot have the

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for spending with their loved ones like their families or friends. Because connecting on the Internet provides us

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by myself and we even do not think about

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socialiazed

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socialized

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, after a

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day, nearly everyone wants to stay down on the couch and be relaxed, by the

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they doing that they

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prefer to kill

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on their phones

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of talking with others because it is easier to do that and it helps to be relaxed.

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, chat pots are a cutting-edge technology development that we have, and their users are rapidly increasing nowadays. It takes over the

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that

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spend with each other. Because of that,

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are used to talking with

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of actual human beings.

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is a strongly detrimental problem for human interactions and communication skills. If

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growing rate of using chat-pots constantly increased like that, there would be no hope for creating a social society. In conclusion,

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there are plenty of benefits that come with technological development, I believe these achievements lead us to be more unsocial and withdraw into our’s Shell.