You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate had returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to to him / her. In your letter: apologize for the mistake find out how important the book is to him / her say what you will do

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Dear Zaki I hope you returned

home

safe and well. I'm writing to apologise for forgetting to return your textbook on time before you went

home

, I was really busy

with

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preparing for my presentation on biology 102 next term

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since I lost mine, your textbook has been really helpful to me to the point that I totally forgot about your flight

home

. I really hope that you don't need

this

particular textbook

while

you're at

home

, especially now that we're done with the exams

this

semester

and

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as far as I know you don't have any

presentation

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this

field, but if you need it, I'

do my best to send it back. As I said in case you want to use it, I'

send it to you via courier or via express

mail

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if you need it as soon as possible, I already have the number of

DHL

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office in town, I'

call them and ask them about the procedures and how much it will cost, and of

course

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don't worry about it I'

gladly pay for it. Please accept my sincere

apologises

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, and I'm waiting for your response. All the best Youcef

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7 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Regret, Apologize, Inconvenience, Retaining, Sentimental value, Crucial, Propose, Solution, Mailing, Replace, Willingness, Costs, Acknowledging, Rectify

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You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate had returned home overseas and you still have the book. Write a letter to to him / her. In your letter: apologize for the mistake find out how important the book is to him / her say what you will do

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