The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996

The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996
The line chart depicts the proportions of noise
complaints
which are categorized into four groups and surveyed biannually from 1980 to 1996 in Newton. In general, all of the
cases
had upward trends
while
only
cases
related to the household had a downward tendency. In detail, approximately 500
complaints
of road works were reported from 1980 to 1984. Surprisingly, the number declined to 400 and fairly remained stable in 1988. At the same time, traffic noise had a similar condition which was stable on 200
complaints
after fell steadily. In the following year, both of them rose dramatically and the road works were the most complained source of the noise.
On the other hand
, the number of
complaints
in factories had a gradual increase from 400 to 600,
then
fluctuated slightly until 1996.
While
the other
cases
increased, the domestic or household
cases
dropped significantly in 1996 from 700 to 100.
This
number indicated that the most solved problem handled by health authorities year by year was domestic
cases
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words complaints, cases with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Complaints
  • Environmental Health authorities
  • Noise pollution
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Trend
  • Spikes
  • Fluctuations
  • Time frame
  • Population growth
  • Industrial development
  • Public awareness
  • Implications
  • Addressing the issue
  • Data analysis
  • Year-on-year changes
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