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In many countries people increasingly talk about money (how much they earn or how much they pay for things in their daily conversations). Why? Is this a positive or negative development?

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, the residents in many countries start to discuss their daily costs between conversations with
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According to
 the cultural difference, western
people
 tend to not mention financial issues in a conversation;
however
,
people
 from eastern countries adore asking about jobs, and salaries in life. Eastern residents think that it is a warm-up to get to know a person, and western residents tend to skip these topics because they consider financial is their private life.
Besides
, in recent decades, economic technology has changed the whole society around the world, it is convenient to get information through the internet. On the hand, it is easier for many companies to have business overseas, and that makes the workers involved in different situations for facing
people
 from background difference.
Therefore
, except for business conferences,
people
 start to talk about
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daily payment because it is closer to our life and easy to get a connection with others to know their activity of them.
On the other hand
, when we discuss too many money issues with our friends or co-workers, it will
also
 make us into trouble. Though talking about private financial topics makes
people
 get connected and find the solutions to our problems, we still need to pay attention to it. Because everyone has different facts and causes the results
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 which makes
people
 learn lessons from each other. In conclusion, though there are disadvantages
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 talking about money in public, there are more advantages for
people
 to discuss with others.
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 others and
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 the same way.
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