Some people think universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Others believe that this is an unacceptable policy.
Some
people
think that universities
should accept equal numbers of male and female students
in every subject while
other people
believe that it is an unacceptable policy. I think that this
is a widely held perception in many parts of the world. In the following essay, I discuss these situations and give my own opinion.
First and foremost, nowadays the amount of students
is dramatically increasing year
by year
. They are both girls and boys
. There are a lot of subjects and these subjects are full of students
. Yet, there are some fields where the number of girls is more than boys
. For instance
, in my hometown, girls tend to learn the subject of English. For
this
reason, the universities
that belong to learning the English language are full of female students
. Moreover
, there are other subjects that more boys
tend to attend in these courses. I think that this
is a common situation.
On the other hand
, universities
should accept equal numbers of male and female students
. Because there are a lot of jobs that need both women and men. I think that it is important to encourage young boys
to learn foreign languages rather than studying electronic or construction lessons, especially, in my hometown. The solution to this
phenomenon would be teaching the students
about equality with their school teachers.
To conclude
, I reiterate my position that, nowadays the number of students
is dramatically increasing year
by year
. Then
some people
think that universities
should accept equal numbers of male and female students
in every subject while
other people
believe that it is not an acceptable situation. I personally believe that teachers should teach children about equality at universities
since they are studying at their schools.Submitted by asqar4997 on
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