Some people think universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Others believe that this is an unacceptable policy.

Some
people
think that
universities
should accept equal numbers of male and female
students
in every subject
while
other
people
believe that it is an unacceptable policy. I think that
this
is a widely held perception in many parts of the world. In the following essay, I discuss these situations and give my own opinion. First and foremost, nowadays the amount of
students
is dramatically increasing
year
by
year
. They are both girls and
boys
. There are a lot of subjects and these subjects are full of
students
. Yet, there are some fields where the number of girls is more than
boys
.
For instance
, in my hometown, girls tend to learn the subject of English.
For
this
reason, the
universities
that belong to learning the English language are full of female
students
.
Moreover
, there are other subjects that more
boys
tend to attend in these courses. I think that
this
is a common situation.
On the other hand
,
universities
should accept equal numbers of male and female
students
. Because there are a lot of jobs that need both women and men. I think that it is important to encourage young
boys
to learn foreign languages rather than studying electronic or construction lessons, especially, in my hometown. The solution to
this
phenomenon would be teaching the
students
about equality with their school teachers.
To conclude
, I reiterate my position that, nowadays the number of
students
is dramatically increasing
year
by
year
.
Then
some
people
think that
universities
should accept equal numbers of male and female
students
in every subject
while
other
people
believe that it is not an acceptable situation. I personally believe that teachers should teach children about equality at
universities
since they are studying at their schools.
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