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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some information is too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your ownopinion. Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

#people #information #research #business #world #ownopinion
As the author states,
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expressing
wide
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 range of resources with scientists, entrepreneurs ,teachers and professors is beneficial.
This
practise
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 aids to be more resourceful and knowledgeable
additionaly
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additionally
additional
 to be extremely evident and justify
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 correctness.  In order to, support the
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 statement we would discuss
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it with
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few
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idea
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 and examples.
Firstly
, when we share our knowledge
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 wise
people
of
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the
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society that makes the content
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like
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 on the cake. Not only,
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do they
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they
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but they also
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 add value to our learning by doing research and
experiements
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experiments
. Like nobal coronavirus was contagious.
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, if we didn't receive
this
 information it would be difficult to handle the
people
 and make
people
 aware that
this
 contagious infection
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need to take necessary actions in order to prevent
from
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 spreading.
Secondaly
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, the businessman share
there
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 financial reports either quarterly,
half yearly
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 or annually in
the
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any leading daily
newsapaper
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newspaper
. Because
,
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 the
people
 who have invested in the organisation have a legal right to evaluate
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the organisation
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organisation
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 performance on yearly basis. So that, they have
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 and unambiguous
picture
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pictures
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 of
company's
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the company's
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 growth.
Thirdly
,
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university students share
there
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their
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 study with academic
people
 so, they modify the work and represent. These
people
such
 as teachers, professors or research students publish
those
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 work in
academic
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an academic
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journal
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journals
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,
newaspapers
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newspapers
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 or
magazine
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magazines
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 that, make the modified resources
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authentic.
On the other hand
, the author states that some information is quite precious to state openly in public. Because, any information gathered
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while
 researching or experimenting in the lab
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can impact things at
things at
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the global level- like working on nuclear energy. If
,
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 the
memebers
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members
 of other
country
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countries
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 got to know about
this
 research they would probably use all measures that
this
 activity should not be performed because it would make that country
more
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stronger.
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