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In many countries people increasingly talk about money (how much they earn or how much they pay for things in their daily conversations). Why? Is this a positive or negative development?

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In contrast
 with the past, residents in many countries are starting to discuss their daily expenses in conversations with
people
. Whether it is a positive or negative phenomenon, I would explain my opinion in
this
 essay. Because of cultural differences,
people
 in the West tend
not to mention
 financial issues in daily conversations;
however
,
people
 from eastern countries love asking about the job, and salaries in real life. Eastern
people
 think that it is a warm-up to get to know a person, and western
people
 tend to skip these topics because they consider financial details to be private.
Besides
, in recent decades, technology has changed society around the world, and it is convenient to get information through the internet. On one hand, it is easier for many companies to have business overseas, and that makes the workers involved in different situations face
people
 from different backgrounds.
Therefore
, except for business conferences,
people
 start to talk about their daily expenses because it is closer to our life and easy to get the connection with
others
 to know more about their life.
On the other hand
, when we discuss too many money issues with our friends or co-workers, it will
also
 make us into trouble. Though talking about private financial topics makes
people
 get connected and find solutions to our problems, we still need to pay attention to them. Because everyone has different facts
such
 as monthly bills, loans, and budgets which cause the results
different
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 and make
people
 learn lessons from
others
' experiences. In conclusion, though there are disadvantages to about talking money in public, there are more advantages for
people
 to discuss with
others
.
People
 can learn the experience from
others
 and not make mistakes the same way.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • materialism
  • economic disparity
  • transparency
  • financial planning
  • financial stress
  • culture of comparison
  • societal taboos
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