Some people believe that violence in the media, such as in television programs and films, directly results in violent behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Violence
is always a hot topic in society. Because of that, many movies or programs make up for this
problem. It leads to some people
believing and having violent behaviour in real life. In my opinion, media products that make about violence
affect people
's violent behaviour.
To begin
with, young people
who play games or watch films that have violent features will have violent acts earlier than age. For example
, children will fight with others like in many fighting games to find out who is stronger. Moreover
, there are many newspapers written about people
who killed others like the way
the killers did in horror movies they watched. If the elderly do not take care of young people
in a good way
, they will become violent people
when they grow up.
After that, If people
watch so many violent media products, they will just remember violence
when they are stuck in a problem. For instance
, many school shootings happen because students hate or want revenge, some of whom know this
way
through movies or the internet. Besides
that, many fights happen just for insignificant reasons. People
will have a better way
to solve problems if they watch advantage programs.
In conclusion, media products about violence
have many bad effects on people
's behaviour. It should be age-restricted and less broadcast.Submitted by pcamps.pr on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
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Linking word examples:
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- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
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- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
