You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this . Write a letter to the manager . In your letter: •Explain why you take time off work •Give details of the amount of time you need •Suggest how your work covered while you are away

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Dear Manager, I am writing

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letter to you to tell my problem and request some time off

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. I will not be able to

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month

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. Because I have some problems.

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Saturday I went to the mountains to see their beautiful scenes with my friends.

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, I injured my legs on our second day.

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we went to the hospital.

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the doctor gave me advice that I should not go out and

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till next

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reason, I cannot go to

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. I am going to suggest that I can

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online during

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. I would certainly be interested in hearing from you soon. I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem. I hope you will resolve the matter to our satisfaction. If you need any other details, please feel free to write to me. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Dream

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Rashidova S.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

161 words

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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this . Write a letter to the manager . In your letter: •Explain why you take time off work •Give details of the amount of time you need •Suggest how your work covered while you are away

Structure your letter

In some cities public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetable. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

the type of media that people of differnt age groups used to get daily newsw in one country in 2011

Some people think that there's nothing we can learn from history previous characters,while on the other hand,some of them believe that there is a lot that we can learn from history,such as avoiding the mistakes that people before made. In this article, I will be discussing both views.

Some people think that manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.