Supermarkets should only sell food products from within their own country rather than imports from overseas. What are your opinions on this?

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variety

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sold in supermarkets.

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the majority of

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are imported from other countries. I strongly believe we need to look into alternative solutions rather than importing essential food

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from overseas. I will discuss

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in my essay. Majority of the people have created a habit to buy

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from supermarkets

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fast-moving lifestyle, but what they do not understand is how effectively it could destroy our health and minimum the life cyc le of a human. The reason could be simple, imported

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have to sustain for a long period of time compared to local

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.

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could be mainly

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the time that takes the

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to import into the country. In

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case, chemicals have to be added to preserve the nature of the

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till it gets to the

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but the supermarkets attract the

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to buy the

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by keeping the display attractive. We need to encourage our local farmers.

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can be only accomplished by finding a way to connect the

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and the supplier. Sri Lanka has a good solid,

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any food

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as vegetables and fruits can be grown at home and the results are better than the overseas

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, the

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are fresh and in less time supplier can deliver to the

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and maintain a short due date for the

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of countries

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from cancer and other diseases

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the chemical intake in the body.

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cannot be solved overnight but we can limit the intake by supporting local

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. Considering the above facts, we need the encourage the

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to buy more

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which are hygienic and

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. We can do awareness programmes on food

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and the effects that can cause on health, not only limited that. Government can

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and initiate a programme to encourage people to grow at home and

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support farmers by taking the

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at a good rate. At some point,

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initiative could improve massively and help the economy to upsize

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people's

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