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Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems, people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that to overcome the
problem
 of
traffic
 and
transportation
, humans should be motivated to live in
cities
 rather than in suburbs or in the
countryside
, in my opinion, I disagree that the solution to the
traffic
 and
Transportation
problem
 is
people
 should move to live in
cities
 rather than suburbs or in the
countryside
,
although
 many
people
 go from the
countryside
 to
cities
 by private
cars
 because of the work, there are some ways to solve
traffic
 and
Transportation
 problems
such
 as improving the
transportation
 facilities and group travelling.
To begin
 with, the
problem
 of the crowded
traffic
 in
cities
 is because many
people
 go to their work by private car as there is no alternative to use
instead
.
Thus
, improving the
transportation
 facilities is crucial to reduce the number of
cars
 on the street.
For example
, when there is safer and more comfortable public
transportation
,
people
 will be confident to use it
instead
 of private
cars
.
On the other hand
, encourage the travelling group to the workers,
this
 solution is applicable to the
people
 who are from the same
countryside
 and go to the same office or near to each other.
For instance
,
people
 from the same area could go in the same car together
hence
 less
traffic
 flow to
cities
.
Accordingly
, the number of
cars
 on the street is decreased and workers could share the cost together.
To conclude
, there are two ways to solve the
problem
 of
transportation
 and
traffic
such
 as the improvement of
transportation
 facilities and encouraging the travelling group. Those ways are better than the
people
 moving to live in
cities
. These solutions should be considered by workers if they want to find a way to overcome the
problem
 of crowded
traffic
 every day when they go to work.
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