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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

#people #waste #homes #governments #requirement #laws
Recycling
of
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waste
 makes our environment healthier and
make
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 our homes clean and tidy.
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amout
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amount
amounts
 of unwanted particles are abandoned in neighbourhood areas of our
home
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homes
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 and
with
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the help of
proper
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method
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 of reversing the materials supports to
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a reduction
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 in buying power of plastic products and
also
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 in global warming. In my opinion, I strongly agree that creating a legal law by the
governement
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government
 for
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partcipation
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participation
 of households in
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 reverse activity is necessary.
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reinforse
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reinforce
 my view.
Firstly
, step by step process is required from the stage of collection to procurement and recycling
moreover
 government should
directy
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directly
 assign a team to interact with the family members
arnd
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and
 create awareness about the importance of
waste
 management.
For instance
, countries like US and China have created laws which
explains
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 that each
households
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 need to submit information regarding the amount of
waste
 they have recycled.
In other words
, strict laws are sufficient to make
public
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 understand the importance of
waste
 management
in addition
,
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municipal corporations and other public bodies need to provide subsidies or rewards for the
comunities
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communities
who
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 contribute towards recycling. To exemplify, Indore is a city in India known for
the
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 best
waste
 management city in the world
this
 recognition is the result of the joint corporation of both the authorities and
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involovement
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involvement
 of each and every individual
acheived
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achieved
 through implementing laws. In conclusion, effective formulation of legal requirement lead to growth in
the
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recycling activities and
result
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the result
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 will be a larger quantity of
waste
 particles on the move to restructuring towards a responsible environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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